Sunday, March 13, 2011

Heroic dreams

Heroic dreams

              I                                                                                                                                                                 a        wh
      ish     could              eally good night’s sleep,                                                                        e                  er                       h
  w                         g         r                                                       with really                                           dr                          e I               e   e                                 

I                                et a                                                                                  cool, adventurous                                       am    h          r
                                                                                                                                                                                                                     t              o.

Ken Goree

This is a shape poem.  Since I feel the need to explain what it is supposed to look like, I'm not sure it turned out the way I wanted it to. 

10 points to the first person to comment with the correct explanation of what it is supposed to look like. 


  1. This is like a Rorschach test. I see a guy laying on his back with his knees up in a modified shock position.
    Unfortunately, I can't read the poem very well on the iPad with the black backreound. I need to print it out to try and understand the whole thing.

  2. Yes, it is just someone lying down, and it does need to be viewed on a full screen to be able to read it.

    With the proper incentive, I might be convinced to share the secret of the poem.