Out of a Crowd
Heart feels warm, full, clear
My eyes closed, you can enter
Senses recognize
Ken Goree
I called this poem Out of a Crowd, as in “picking someone out of a crowd,” to try to explain how a person’s senses become heightened when they have found that special someone that they have “chemistry” with.
So often, I find that, I am not satisfied with my poems. There is so much more I would want to say, or I wish I had said it better. At least with the haiku, saying it better is my only worry … I have to be satisfied with the length.
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